Friday 27 June 2014

I'm having a problem desiding pt 2- With Beck Turner (The Secret Trio Version)

Randy’s pov
“Now we just need the black ninja,” Piper said, ticking off the white ninja on her list. I thought; I only knew one black ninja; Shadow or Beck Turner.
“What’s the exact shade of black?” I asked
“Shadow or Midnight,” Piper replied “Do you know them?”
“Yeah, I do but you missed her by two months,” I said casually.
“Wait, you’re saying that the last ninja which is needed to save the earth is missing?” Yandi asked
“No, Beck Turner moved back to New Zealand two months ago,” I replied “She’s the female ninja called Shadow,”
“And she’s not coming back anytime soon, that’s for sure;” Brandon sighed “We’ll never win now,”
“It’s December right? In New Zealand they have a wacky way for school, December is their summer holidays, two weeks in December and the whole month of January,” Olivia said
“By the way, New Zealand is not wack, it’s the US,” A voice said “I don’t get why you start in September or why you use grades,”
“Who knows about this tree house Randy?” Peter asked
“Howard but he’s out of the country, Jake Long, Danny Fenton and Beck,” I replied “Jake and Danny are busy in their own home towns,”
“So the only one who would know about this is Beck,” Peter said.
“And I have to agree with Beck on this one, it’s smart to have school start in February and end it in December,” I told them “But I guess we’re on the other side of the world,”
“Unless I’m actually on America Soil, then I’m here ready to fight,” The voice said.
“And it’s summer holidays,” I said “Come on in Beck,”
“I prefer to stay in the shadows, you know that Randy,” Beck replied
“Don’t go all Shadow on me now Beck,” I glared.
“But what if I am Shadow?” Beck replied, laughing as she walked through the door.
“Dual personalities can be really annoying at times,” Olivia said.
“Actually it can be helpful, take it from me, I spent a whole year as Shadow and that didn’t turn out so good,” Beck replied “Let’s just say, this isn’t how I remembered Norrisville,”
“Good times they were,” I muttered. The others looked at us.
“At least there’s no more DNG, otherwise they’d be on your case 24/7,” Beck said, eyeing the others “Who are these lot?”
“Randy, I don’t believe you when you say this is the black ninja,” Piper said.
“Beck, I would like you to meet the other seven ninjas of Norrisville,” I said “Let’s
Just say together, we’re almost unstoppable,”
“Almost? Don’t tell me, there’s great concaquises, why did I ever get tangled up with you?” Beck groaned.
“She’s good,” Brandon muttered.
“My names Wayne Black, White Ninja, Apprentice number 1,” Wayne said, pulling out a black and white mask.
“Peter Brown, and don’t laugh but I’m the pink ninja, apprentice number 3,” Peter sighed, pulling out a pink and black mask. Beck Shrugged.
“Piper Chile, Purple, number 4,” Piper said, showing her mask.
“I’m Brandon King, My favourite colour is blue and I’m apprentice number 5,” Brandon said, smiling. Beck blushed.
“Georgia May, I’m the green ninja and apprentice number 6!”Georgia yelled, excitedly.
“Yandi, Yellow, number 7,” Yandi muttered.
“Well at least I know someone from another country that moved to Norrisville,” Beck said
“Olivia Goodwin, Light Orange Ninja, Number 8,” Olivia monotone “And I don’t approve on tattoos,” She said, looking at Beck’s left arm.
“And you know who I am, Red Ninja – Number Nine,” I said, shrugging “Your turn,”
“Beck Turner and/or Shadow. It depends on my mood at the time and what I’m wearing, I guess I’m the black ninja and number two,” Beck said. She brought out her mask to prove it.
“Wayne, ironic surname and the fact that Bruce Wayne is Batman, Peter – I know a lot of boys who like the colour pink, I don’t like your tone Piper, Brandon you’re welcome to be my king, Georgia you remind me of Pinkie Pie from My Little Pony, Olivia – there are things in life that I wish that didn’t happen and things that didn’t happen to you lot but happened to some friends and I. Randy it’s good to see you again,” Beck said “I’m not explain my tattoo, plus if you ask the person who did won’t even remember me or Shadow, Like I said a whole year as Shadow,”
“And some other weird things,” I mutter. Piper looked at us. She frowned.
“Is there something going on between you two?” She asked.
“For ninjas, you’re pretty bad if you haven’t notice that Randy likes someone else,” Beck said “If you hadn’t noticed Piper, now I get it, sorry I get off track at times, I’m crushing on someone else,”
“So, but there’s something you and Randy aren’t telling us isn’t there?” Piper replied.  I looked at Beck.
“So what if there is? It’s not like you would believe us anyway and plus it never really happened and the only people who can back us up are super busy with their own lives,” I replied, smiling.
“I’ve got to get going, I have homework to do,” Olivia said, picking up her bag. The others muttered their excuses and left the tree house.
“So where are you staying?” I asked Beck. She looked shocked.
“Didn’t your mother tell you? I’m staying with you,” She replied, smiling “Plus we need to talk about you know what,” Her smile faded. My smile faded. What she was talking about was serious – we hadn’t talked about this since the day it happened. What she was talking about was something that never really happened.
“What are we going to do, Piper knows we’re hiding something,” Beck whispered “She’ll make the connections, I can tell, she’ll go through the school yearbooks to check, then she’ll research Shadow, then she’ll research Danny Fenton and Jake Long,” I did not like where this is going.
“We defiantly can’t tell anyone, we made a promise to you know who,” I said.
“And then Piper will manipulate Olivia to help her research their connections to Danny Phantom and The American Dragon, then, when she has gathered enough information, she’ll tell everyone and force me to explain my tattoo which, like I told Olivia, I do NOT want to do,” Beck continued.
“And you got that from only two exchanges?” I asked. She nodded
“Of course I did – once you learn something you never really forget it,” I laughed.
“Come on, let’s get inside – Mum’s getting pizza,” I said, jumping out of the tree house

This a totally different scene that will come later.

“Okay Piper if you really want to know, I’ll tell you,” Beck yelled “Each line represents someone, the top one is Danny Phantom, the second one is The American Dragon and the third – the ninja of Norrisville, I got it when I was 18,”
“But you’re only 16, it’s unrealistic,” Olivia said.
“Beck was once 18, just on a different time line,” I butted in “Danny, Jake, Beck and I were all on a different time line, two actually. The original time line. In this time line we had to change otherwise the universe would go kaput, Clockwork – someone who I rather not mention – changed out ages, I stayed the same, Beck became two years older than me, Jake four and Danny six,”
“I still became Shadow because of my request of when I found out that my dad went missing, I then went to New York where we met once again – Randy on winter break, I wondering the streets, Jake studying to become an engeearie and Danny as a suritecy man for a couple groups. There we found out about DNG. DNG was a group of people who want to hunt down and destroy all Dragons, The ninja of Norrisville and Ghosts. My mother, who I had thought to have died when I was five months old, and my father, who went missing the year before, was a part of it,” Beck kept going
“Because the Ninja of Norrisville was only one person, we knew they would come after me first, Beck came back to Norrisville to protect me and keep an eye on me by becoming the new school janitor. We defeated them DNG, well actually Clockwork combined the new with the original with some changes. Beck’s mum really did die when she was five months old and we would remember what had happened. We promised each other that we would never tell anyone this because it’s really confusing and it’s personal,” I concluded.
“You were keeping that from us the whole time!” Yandi yelled “We’re supposed to be a team. We’re supposed to tell everything!” Everyone starred at him.
“Okay, that was weird,” Brandon whispered “So is that the only reason?”
“Of course it is!” Beck yelled “Dude, I thought you would believe me when I said you don’t want to know! I thought it was clear that Randy and I didn’t want to talk about it. Heck we haven’t even written to each other about it, it was so bad that that we just couldn’t! I watch my mum die in front of me because she and my dad tricked me!”
“No there’s more, I know there is,” Piper said “Beck and Randy like each other, I’ve checked your room, there’s a stack of hand written letters from Beck,”
“Piper, I’m not allowed any technology that could hurt my little sister, no computer and no telephone. I had to write by hand!” Beck yelled “And, Sorry Randy, Randy likes Theresa!”
“I’m going to kill you Beck,” I mutter. She rolls her eyes.

“Look, Piper, I don’t get why you can’t be happy not knowing something about me and Randy that we promised never to tell anyone about!” She finally said “But if you want to be that way, I quit, I go back to New Zealand in less than a week, and I’ll be out of your hair and you out of mine. I’m going solo, I’ve never been a group person, never have never will be,” And with that Beck jumped out the window, pulling her mask over her head and headed towards the city

Hope you enjoyed my writing. Just so that you don't go huh when you see the part when Brandon says that was werid - Yandi is a shy and quiet boy who never yells
Nutmeg Out (For Now)

I'm having trouble deciding pt 1 - The problem

Hey, Nutmeg here. As you would have seen in my last post, I am writng about 30 stories at once. I have an idea, I have to put it down. The I forget about what I was working on. So here's the sitch...

One of my stories that I am writng is about Danny Phantom, American Dragon: Jake Long and Randy Cunningham 9th Grade Ninja. In this story one of my main characters is Beck Turner. In the first story (The Secret Trio) Beck is being hunted by Monsters and Ghosts. One Day after she gets home from Norrisville High, she finds out that her dad is missing. Julie, her step mum doesn't understand when Beck yells that she's an orphan. You see Julie was never told that Beck's mum had died when Beck was only Five Months old and that Beck grew up with only a dad. Earlier she recives from a bag from S.Ward Smith (obivous hint if you have seen Randy Cunningham 9th Grade Ninja) which contains a ninja mask and ninja weapons. That Night after the movies, Beck uses the mask to fight a monster that has come after her. The Ninja (Who she discovers is Randy) comes to help save her like the other times that she has needed it. Then a Dragon apears and it turns out that When the ninja isn't saving her it's the American Dragon. The Next Monday after a fight with a ghost, Jake Long (The new Student who has befriended Randy, Howard and Beck), Randy, Howard and Beck met Danny Fenton who is really Danny Phantom. These three heroes have all saved Beck from monsters or ghosts sometime the week before. Together, along with Shadow (Beck's hero name) they try to fight the people who are coming to destroy Beck. Clockwork shows up and changes the time line so that Beck is 17, Jake is 19 and Danny is 21 and that they never knew each other.
The second story is set the next year (The Secret Trio: Reborn) in New York. Randy, Jake, Danny and Beck all meet each other once again and find out about a group called the DNG. DNG is about destroying Dragons, the Ninja of Norrisville and Ghosts. Beck's parents are somehow involed with them.
In The Secret Trio: Dragons, Ninja and Ghosts, Beck follows Randy back home to Norrisville so that if anything happens, she'll be ready. Beck discovers something that shatters her life. Her Parents are alive and are a part of DNG. SHe formulates a plan. Clockwork shows up once again and reverts the time line so that Beck's mum really did die when she was five months old, Jake, Danny and Beck were back to being 16 year olds. Beck Leaves Norrisville to go back to Matamata, New Zealand (Her hometown).

I want to use Beck Turner as a character in one of my stories so that it adds suspence and tension between the group of nine ninja in Norrisville. The problem is that it doesn't add up and it could be better if I didn't make a refernece to The Secret Trio. I will post two paragraphs of each verison and let you chose which is better.

Nutmeg

Sorry I haven't been on

Hey Everyone - Nutmeg here. Apologies for not posting in ages. I have had

  • School Production
  • Reading
  • Homework
  • Emailing and stuff
  • Wataching Old Cartoons that no one really cares about now days
  • Writing more fan fictions/stories (Alot actually - I've only finished 1 out of 30 something)
  • Working on JAFAN with my friends
  • Sleeping
  • Eating
  • Running (I know - I've gone crazy)
  • Filling up my caldener with soical events such as birthday parties and a school disco (Yes, I have a social caladener)
  • Listenig to music
  • Playing music
  • Google + ing
  • Surporting Holland in the FIFA world cup (Yes, I am dutch)
  • Pearparing for my 13th birthday which is less than a month away :)
  • Designing characters
There's probably more but that's all I can think of. If you bothered to read my list you would have noticed JAFAN. JAFAN is a group of people who are youtubers that I'm friends with. Together we make videos and things. Please Check out the videos we have so far and subscribe. There will be Bad Joke Central and after I get back from Austrilia, hopefully a trvael video which I hope will inspire you to go to Austrilia and other places. There will also be Minecraft and other things. If you see someone saying "I'm a noob, I have no idea what you are saying" It's propbably me. 

Yes it's my birthday coming up. I'm excited, the only thing that ruins it is that my Birthday is on the First Thrusday back at school. It's cool that I actually can spend my birthday with my friends. Dang it, forgot - otargo problem solving. Stuff that.

That's all I say right now. Hope to post again soon
Nutmeg
Dude, I'm Busy!