Hey, Nutmeg here. As you would have seen in my last post, I am writng about 30 stories at once. I have an idea, I have to put it down. The I forget about what I was working on. So here's the sitch...
One of my stories that I am writng is about Danny Phantom, American Dragon: Jake Long and Randy Cunningham 9th Grade Ninja. In this story one of my main characters is Beck Turner. In the first story (The Secret Trio) Beck is being hunted by Monsters and Ghosts. One Day after she gets home from Norrisville High, she finds out that her dad is missing. Julie, her step mum doesn't understand when Beck yells that she's an orphan. You see Julie was never told that Beck's mum had died when Beck was only Five Months old and that Beck grew up with only a dad. Earlier she recives from a bag from S.Ward Smith (obivous hint if you have seen Randy Cunningham 9th Grade Ninja) which contains a ninja mask and ninja weapons. That Night after the movies, Beck uses the mask to fight a monster that has come after her. The Ninja (Who she discovers is Randy) comes to help save her like the other times that she has needed it. Then a Dragon apears and it turns out that When the ninja isn't saving her it's the American Dragon. The Next Monday after a fight with a ghost, Jake Long (The new Student who has befriended Randy, Howard and Beck), Randy, Howard and Beck met Danny Fenton who is really Danny Phantom. These three heroes have all saved Beck from monsters or ghosts sometime the week before. Together, along with Shadow (Beck's hero name) they try to fight the people who are coming to destroy Beck. Clockwork shows up and changes the time line so that Beck is 17, Jake is 19 and Danny is 21 and that they never knew each other.
The second story is set the next year (The Secret Trio: Reborn) in New York. Randy, Jake, Danny and Beck all meet each other once again and find out about a group called the DNG. DNG is about destroying Dragons, the Ninja of Norrisville and Ghosts. Beck's parents are somehow involed with them.
In The Secret Trio: Dragons, Ninja and Ghosts, Beck follows Randy back home to Norrisville so that if anything happens, she'll be ready. Beck discovers something that shatters her life. Her Parents are alive and are a part of DNG. SHe formulates a plan. Clockwork shows up once again and reverts the time line so that Beck's mum really did die when she was five months old, Jake, Danny and Beck were back to being 16 year olds. Beck Leaves Norrisville to go back to Matamata, New Zealand (Her hometown).
I want to use Beck Turner as a character in one of my stories so that it adds suspence and tension between the group of nine ninja in Norrisville. The problem is that it doesn't add up and it could be better if I didn't make a refernece to The Secret Trio. I will post two paragraphs of each verison and let you chose which is better.
Nutmeg
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